My Lands: Black Gem Hunting

A pretty decent setup for the story, there are some time gaps that feel rushed and the battle is not very descriptive at all (it is begun and over within one line)...but there is a lot more effort than many stories put here. Most interestingly, Gaulor is still alive! I agree, you should try to get ...

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ONCE, LONG TIME AGO… There was a small, beautiful elven kingdom on the outer rim of a world called my lands. It was peace full, prosperative ,and safe,at least their king Bahaer tought so .He had three sons, Balion, Bandelan and the youngest ,Bahelias. Bahelias was still a young teen boy, and a ...